twin heart melody QC

Missions/event044/345001011_translations_eng.json

@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
 	"345001011_11": "I need to thank you for everything you've done. \\n You were such a good friend to Kiri.",
 	"345001011_12": "...",
 	"345001011_13": "Being friends with her was a breeze!",
-	"345001011_14": "You deserve a thank you too, Julius. \\n Without your help, I wouldn't've been able to protect these girls.",
+	"345001011_14": "You deserve a thank you too, Julius. \\n Without your help, I wouldn't have been able to protect these girls.",
 	"345001011_15": "I just gave a little support. \\n The only people you need to thank are the Adaptors and yourself.",
 	"345001011_16": "You're very flattering. \\n I'll find a way to thank you some day.",
-	"345001011_17": "What are you plans for the future? \\n The F.I.S. knows where your hideout is.",
+	"345001011_17": "What are your plans for the future? \\n The F.I.S. knows where your hideout is.",
 	"345001011_18": "We can't go anywhere until Kiri's a little stronger. \\n After that, we'll find another place to stay.",
 	"345001011_19": "I see.",
 	"345001011_20": "I hope you can find a nice home.",
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 	"345001011_41": "If you're any sort of scientist like me or my bone-headed assistant, \\n you've definitely heard the name before.",
 	"345001011_42": "What? What does that mean?",
 	"345001011_43": "That's all I can say.",
-	"345001011_44": "(It sounds like they got their technology from a researcher with incredible knowledge... \\n Could they mean Sakurai Ryoko?)",
+	"345001011_44": "(It sounds like they got their technology from a researcher with incredible knowledge... Could they mean Sakurai Ryouko?)",
 	"345001011_45": "If you're going to continue to travel between worlds, \\n I'm sure this won't be the last time we see each other.",
 	"345001011_46": "I hope so.",
 	"345001011_47": "I apologize for being so little help.",
@@ -61,13 +61,13 @@
 	"345001011_59": "Alright then. Bye-bye!",
 	"345001011_60": "Bye-bye, see you later!",
 	"345001011_61": "How are you feeling, Kiri?",
-	"345001011_62": "I'm fit a fiddle. \\n Look, I was even able to—ack—eat all the food—!",
+	"345001011_62": "I'm fit as a fiddle. \\n Look, I was even able to—ack—eat all the food—!",
 	"345001011_63": "Are you alright?! Here, drink some water.",
 	"345001011_64": "Bluh... Phew... \\n Ahaha, I guess I'm still not used to eating.",
 	"345001011_65": "You need to be careful; your body's still recovering. \\n Here, take this. I thought you'd be bored, so I brought you a book.",
 	"345001011_66": "Ooh, thank you!",
 	"345001011_67": "Let's see... robotics, data processing, and programming. \\n I don't think I'll be very good at reading this.",
-	"345001011_68": "That's not too surprising...",
+	"345001011_68": "That's not too surprising.",
 	"345001011_69": "Oh, is that a recipe book? \\n Wow, there's so many tasty-looking things in here!",
 	"345001011_70": "When you're feeling up to it, \\n I'll cook you anything you want.",
 	"345001011_71": "Really?! Then I'd like to eat this one, a burger-omu-rice!",
@@ -81,18 +81,18 @@
 	"345001011_79": "I'm fully aware of her current condition, \\n and only gave her the sweets I was certain she could—",
 	"345001011_80": "You two are getting along so well it almost makes me jealous—",
 	"345001011_81": "Never say something like that ever again.",
-	"345001011_82": "This is just the man who I grabbed we escaped the F.I.S.—",
+	"345001011_82": "This is just the man who I grabbed when we escaped the F.I.S.—",
 	"345001011_83": "I know. He's also a scientist that taught you all sorts of things, right?",
-	"345001011_84": "Do you have some sort of death wish?",
+	"345001011_84": "Do you have some sort of death wish, you idiot assistant?",
 	"345001011_85": "I haven't told her anything about what I've taught you.",
 	"345001011_86": "Then how does she know about things I haven't told her about?",
 	"345001011_87": "Kirika told me, of course.",
 	"345001011_88": "Kirika told you?",
 	"345001011_89": "Android Kirika. \\n She was here all the time, talking to me.",
 	"345001011_90": "She did? But when did she...",
-	"345001011_91": "It was a part of her daily routine. \\n She would speak to Kirika about what had happened during the day when things were winding down.",
+	"345001011_91": "It was a part of her daily routine. She would speak to Kirika about what had happened during the day when things were winding down.",
 	"345001011_92": "Now that you mention it, \\n I do remember seeing her talk to you a few times.",
-	"345001011_93": "So that's what she was doing. \\n I wouldn't've guessed she'd do something like that.",
+	"345001011_93": "So that's what she was doing. \\n I wouldn't have guessed she'd do something like that.",
 	"345001011_94": "Every time she talked to me, \\n her face lit up when she brought you up.",
 	"345001011_95": "Did it really...",
 	"345001011_96": "Shirabe, you worked so hard. \\n Thank you so, so much.",