events: mikugeah: solopy edit

Missions/event003/304001211_translations_eng.json

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
 	"304001211_6": "Couldn't you have just sent a message? \\n And we had planned for everyone to go shopping...",
 	"304001211_7": "Ugh, sorry. If only I didn't have detention!",
 	"304001211_8": "Well it's your own fault, so you need to reflect on it.",
-	"304001211_9": "Yeah... But Miku you're so nice! \\n You're even going with me to detention!",
-	"304001211_10": "(I don't know who that is, but she has someone... she has Miku so close to her... She's so much different from me...)",
+	"304001211_9": "Yeah... But Miku, you're so nice! \\n You're even going with me to detention!",
+	"304001211_10": "(I don't know who that is, but she has someone... she has Miku so close to her... She's so different from me...)",
 	"304001211_11": "Hibiki, I get worried when I'm not watching you.",
 	"304001211_12": "What? That's so mean! Come on, Miku...",
 	"304001211_13": "Hehe, sorry.",
@@ -29,21 +29,21 @@
 	"304001211_27": "Another stone... What is it? Is it from me...?",
 	"304001211_28": "(What's going on... I don't understand...)",
 	"304001211_29": "And this heat in my chest...",
-	"304001211_30": "It got hotter when I was fighting that monster... and it isn't going back...",
+	"304001211_30": "It got hotter when I was fighting that monster... and it isn't going down...",
 	"304001211_31": "This is weird... Everything is weird...",
 	"304001211_32": "(I can't feel that black Noise anymore... \\n But I know it's still there...)",
-	"304001211_33": "It's my own body but I don't understand anything...",
+	"304001211_33": "It's my own body, but I don't understand anything about it...",
 	"304001211_34": "Somebody, tell me... Somebody, help me...",
 	"304001211_35": "(I'm scared of being alone...)",
-	"304001211_36": "... Ugh Uaahhh!",
+	"304001211_36": "...Ugh Uaahhh!",
 	"304001211_37": "...",
 	"304001211_38": "(Nobody's going to save me... That's right...)",
 	"304001211_39": "(That's how it's always been... What's going to change now...)",
 	"304001211_40": "Everyone's just going to leave... After all, I'm...",
 	"304001211_41": "You're back already?",
 	"304001211_42": "...Yeah.",
-	"304001211_43": "Judging by your reaction things on the other side aren't going so smoothly.",
-	"304001211_44": "There's been an explosion of Noise and Tachibana's illness is getting worse... We need to settle things here as soon as possible.",
+	"304001211_43": "Judging by your reaction, things on the other side aren't going so smoothly.",
+	"304001211_44": "There's been an explosion of Noise and Tachibana Hibiki's illness is getting worse... We need to settle things here as soon as possible.",
 	"304001211_45": "I see...",
 	"304001211_46": "How are things here?",
 	"304001211_47": "Yesterday when Hibiki was fighting some Noise, \\n Goliath appeared again.",
@@ -58,14 +58,14 @@
 	"304001211_56": "What?",
 	"304001211_57": "I see, we can do that to prevent Goliath from retreating...",
 	"304001211_58": "Yeah. Can you get it ready for us?",
-	"304001211_59": "Hm... Leave it to me. It's a perfect opportunity to show the skill of the Second Division.",
+	"304001211_59": "Hm... Leave it to me. It's a perfect opportunity to show the skills of the Second Division.",
 	"304001211_60": "Please.",
-	"304001211_61": "We're detecting a Noise response in an urban area!",
+	"304001211_61": "We're detecting a Noise signal in an urban area!",
 	"304001211_62": "Sorry for asking this of you so soon after you got back, but will you deploy?",
 	"304001211_63": "Yes, of course.",
 	"304001211_64": "Maybe if we stir the pot we can fish out that big bastard!",
 	"304001211_65": "Yeah... Let's go!",
-	"304001211_66": "Wait please! \\n The Noise response... is decreasing with incredible speed!",
+	"304001211_66": "Wait please! \\n The Noise signal strength... is decreasing with incredible speed!",
 	"304001211_67": "What?!",
 	"304001211_68": "Waveform comparison complete! It's...",
 	"304001211_69": "Gungnir... Hibiki?!"