bridal: translation update

Missions/event011/312000421_translations_eng.json

@@ -16,29 +16,29 @@
 	"312000421_14": "(I will enchant you all with this dress!)",
 	"312000421_15": "Maria, we're done!",
 	"312000421_16": "Well done!",
-	"312000421_17": "...We did pretty good, if I say so myself.",
+	"312000421_17": "...We did pretty well, if I say so myself.",
 	"312000421_18": "Good job. \\n I'll take the bouquet.",
 	"312000421_19": "Huh? \\n ...Oh, yeah. Thanks.",
 	"312000421_20": "(...It's a beautiful bouquet. It even smells like happiness. \\n Why do brides get to have such nice things?)",
 	"312000421_21": "...Um... You can have the bouquet if you want it.",
-	"312000421_22": "T-the wedding bouquet?!",
+	"312000421_22": "Th-the wedding bouquet?!",
 	"312000421_23": "Yes. \\n It really suits you, and I think the flowers are happy too!",
 	"312000421_24": "R-really? \\n ...Thanks.",
 	"312000421_25": "These are some really pretty flowers. \\n I'll show them to Shirabe and Kirika when I get home.",
-	"312000421_26": "They still seem to appreciate food more than flowers, \\n but they're still girls so I'm sure they'll appreciate it.",
+	"312000421_26": "They still seem to appreciate food more than flowers, \\n but they're still girls so I'm sure they'll appreciate it all the same.",
 	"312000421_27": "It seems like the shoot went well.",
 	"312000421_28": "Why are you here? Whether you missed me or not, \\n I was going to head back to headquarters later this afternoon...",
 	"312000421_29": "I didn't just come here just because I was lonely.",
-	"312000421_30": "I came because you were fighting on the front lines in that battle yesterday. \\n Let me at least worry about that.",
+	"312000421_30": "I came because you were fighting on the front lines in that battle yesterday. \\n Allow me to at least worry about that.",
 	"312000421_31": "Oh. \\n Well, I'm fine.",
 	"312000421_32": "...Really?",
-	"312000421_33": "(It doesn't seem serious now, \\n but I'm worried about the symptoms worsening under mental strain.)",
+	"312000421_33": "(It doesn't seem serious now, \\n but I'm worried about the symptoms worsening under stress.)",
 	"312000421_34": "(I have to do what I can to keep her at ease.)",
 	"312000421_35": "After this shoot ends, I can say goodbye to this dress. \\n For real this time.",
 	"312000421_36": "Are you that excited about it?",
 	"312000421_37": "Hehe, well I can't deny that.",
 	"312000421_38": "I can't believe how fast seeing the dress makes my heart beat. \\n Wedding dresses really are symbols of happiness.",
-	"312000421_39": "That's right. Now I understand what's going on.",
+	"312000421_39": "Is that so... \\n Now I understand what's going on.",
 	"312000421_40": "It seems that even you are incapable of bringing out a wedding dress's true charm.",
 	"312000421_41": "What?!",
 	"312000421_42": "This is bad, that's the designer!",
@@ -46,24 +46,24 @@
 	"312000421_44": "(And she's also the owner of that cursed dress...)",
 	"312000421_45": "...",
 	"312000421_46": "(That's right! \\n There's a lot of things I need to ask her!)",
-	"312000421_47": "There is a possibility that activation of the philosophical armament in this incident was not a coincidence. It could have been artificially induced.",
+	"312000421_47": "There's a possibility that activation of the philosophical armament in this incident was no coincidence. It could have been artificially induced.",
 	"312000421_48": "Do you suspect the designer?",
 	"312000421_49": "I do. \\n There's a number of incomprehensible points surrounding that dress.",
-	"312000421_50": "First, why the only antique dress she has is that cursed one.",
+	"312000421_50": "First, why the only antique dress she owns is that cursed one.",
 	"312000421_51": "And at the shoot today—",
-	"312000421_52": "And among all the dresses in her brand, \\n she forcefully negotiated with the publishing company about that single dress.",
+	"312000421_52": "Among all the dresses in her brand, \\n she forcefully negotiated with the publishing company about that single dress.",
 	"312000421_53": "And the one who named Shiroki Aiko as the model was none other than \\n Ms. Koutani herself.",
 	"312000421_54": "It's impossible to ignore the possibility that she knew the philosophical armament's activation conditions and purposefully constructed an incident to activate it.",
 	"312000421_55": "I wanted to keep my cool while at work, \\n but I can't let that comment stand.",
 	"312000421_56": "I'll say it again. \\n You are incapable of bringing out a wedding dress's true charm.",
 	"312000421_57": "That dress does not suit you.",
-	"312000421_58": "So what you're trying to say is that the \"cursed wedding dress\" suited that other model?",
+	"312000421_58": "So what you're trying to say is that the \"cursed wedding dress\" \\n suited that other model?",
 	"312000421_59": "...!",
 	"312000421_60": "Wait! \\n Don't mention that dress in front of—",
 	"312000421_61": "Why do you have such an ancient item? \\n Why did you make her wear it? Tell me.",
 	"312000421_62": "...Even if I told you, you wouldn't understand.",
 	"312000421_63": "What do you mean?",
-	"312000421_64": "You don't know a thing about wedding dresses. \\n You are merely enthralled by the appearance.",
+	"312000421_64": "You don't know a thing about wedding dresses. \\n You are merely enthralled by their appearance.",
 	"312000421_65": "...Nothing about this suits you. \\n And hurry up and get rid of that!",
 	"312000421_66": "What?!",
 	"312000421_67": "The wedding bouquet?!",
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
 	"312000421_76": "...I see.",
 	"312000421_77": "Please don't mind her too much. \\n She's a little obsessed.",
 	"312000421_78": "...If you'd excuse me.",
-	"312000421_79": "...That didn't go well.",
+	"312000421_79": "...That didn't go too well.",
 	"312000421_80": "I understand how you feel, but you're good at this kind of work. \\n Don't worry too much.",
 	"312000421_81": "...You're right.",
 	"312000421_82": "...",