mikugeah: partial editing pass from a long-ass time ago

Missions/event003/304000411_translations_eng.json

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 	"304000411_0": "A World Without Sunshine",
 	"304000411_1": "How'd it go? \\n Did you get anything useful out of Hibiki?",
 	"304000411_2": "No, nothing at all...",
-	"304000411_3": "Since then we've tried several times to contact her, \\n but she refuses to say anything...",
-	"304000411_4": "Never mind actual information, we can't even have a normal conversation. \\n I'm have no idea what to do...",
+	"304000411_3": "Since then, we've tried several times to contact her, \\n but she refuses to say anything...",
+	"304000411_4": "Never mind actual information, we can't even have a normal conversation. \\n I'm at a loss of what to do...",
 	"304000411_5": "What's her deal?! Is that even her?!",
 	"304000411_6": "...Sorry.",
 	"304000411_7": "This isn't something you need to apologize for...",
 	"304000411_8": "Do you maybe know why she's like that?",
 	"304000411_9": "Well...",
-	"304000411_10": "If do you, would you tell us?",
+	"304000411_10": "If do you, can you tell us?",
 	"304000411_11": "...",
-	"304000411_12": "It might be hard to talk about, but we're grasping at straws here.",
-	"304000411_13": "If we can't talk to her we can't make and progress, so...",
-	"304000411_14": "...Understood. \\n ...I'll tell you what I can.",
+	"304000411_12": "It might be hard to talk about, but we need something to go on.",
+	"304000411_13": "If we can't talk to her we can't make any progress, so...",
+	"304000411_14": "...I understand. \\n ...I'll tell you what I can.",
 	"304000411_15": "So you do know?",
 	"304000411_16": "That girl has a fairly painful past. \\n Ever since then, she hasn't been able to trust anybody.",
 	"304000411_17": "We've tried many times to contact and assist her, but... \\n unfortunately, she refuses to listen to us.",
-	"304000411_18": "However, she seems to have some sort of interest or obsession in fighting noise. She always rushes onto the battlefield...",
+	"304000411_18": "However, she seems to have some sort of interest or obsession in fighting Noise. \\n She always rushes onto the battlefield...",
 	"304000411_19": "A painful past?",
 	"304000411_20": "She's actually the survivor of an incident—",
-	"304000411_21": "Do you mean Zwei Wing...? \\n There was a noise attack during Amou Kanade and Tsubasa's concert.",
-	"304000411_22": "If you know about that then this is easier to explain.",
-	"304000411_23": "After surviving that concert, she received all of the hatred and blame from the victims' families.",
-	"304000411_24": "Without anyone other than her family at her side, \\n even they were the victims of unreasonable hatred...",
+	"304000411_21": "Do you mean Zwei Wing...? \\n There was a Noise attack during Amou Kanade and Tsubasa's concert.",
+	"304000411_22": "If you know about that, then this is easier to explain.",
+	"304000411_23": "After surviving that concert, \\n she was the target of all of the hatred and blame from the victims' families.",
+	"304000411_24": "She had no-one but her family at her side, \\n  and even they were the victims of unreasonable hatred...",
 	"304000411_25": "I wonder just how badly she was scarred. \\n I don't think we can even begin to understand...",
 	"304000411_26": "W-Wait a minute, old man.",
 	"304000411_27": "Hm?",
-	"304000411_28": "Did you just say \"without anyone other than her family\"? \\n What about her?",
+	"304000411_28": "Did you just say \"she had no-one but her family\"? \\n What about <i>her</i>?",
 	"304000411_29": "Her...? Who do you mean?",
-	"304000411_30": "I suppose she's talking about Kohinata Miku.",
-	"304000411_31": "Kohinata...? No, I haven't heard of anybody by that name in her neighborhood...",
+	"304000411_30": "I suppose she means Kohinata Miku.",
+	"304000411_31": "Kohinata...? No, I haven't heard of anybody by that name in relation to her...",
 	"304000411_32": "What?",
-	"304000411_33": "Well what the hell.",
+	"304000411_33": "Well, what the hell?",
 	"304000411_34": "It definitely seems like she isn't by Tachibana Hibiki's side.",
 	"304000411_35": "So then where is she? \\n I can't believe they wouldn't be together...",
-	"304000411_36": "No idea. We don't know where she lives, if she lives, or if she even lived in the first place...",
+	"304000411_36": "No idea. We don't know where she lives, if she lives, \\n or if she even lived in the first place...",
 	"304000411_37": "Don't even say that...",
 	"304000411_38": "Either way, that's not what's important right now.",
 	"304000411_39": "Now we know why she's different in this world.",
-	"304000411_40": "We have to manage to get the information about the noise from her.",
+	"304000411_40": "We have to manage to get information about the Noise out of her.",
 	"304000411_41": "So her feelings come second?",
-	"304000411_42": "That's not what I said. \\n I'm just saying are priorities are slightly different...",
-	"304000411_43": "Shit! More noise?!",
-	"304000411_44": "She might be there. It's another chance to contact her.",
-	"304000411_45": "...And it's not like we can just leave the noise there.",
+	"304000411_42": "That's not what I said. \\n I'm just saying our priorities are slightly different...",
+	"304000411_43": "Shit! More Noise?!",
+	"304000411_44": "She might be there. It's another chance to reach out to her.",
+	"304000411_45": "...And it's not like we can just let the Noise hang around.",
 	"304000411_46": "Are you two willing to lend a hand?",
 	"304000411_47": "Of course. What's the situation?",
-	"304000411_48": "Evacuation of the inhabitants hasn't finished yet. \\n We can't allow the noise to continue to have dominion over downtown.",
+	"304000411_48": "Evacuation of the citizens hasn't finished yet. \\n We can't allow the Noise to continue walking freely through the streets.",
 	"304000411_49": "I wanted an extra set of hands. \\n It'd really help.",
 	"304000411_50": "If you need more hands, then she'll probably sniff out the trouble as well.",
 	"304000411_51": "Tachibana?",